Need and desire are two distinct yet crucial story elements, often misunderstood as a single step. In The Anatomy of Story, John Truby explains how need drives internal transformation while desire propels external action. Understanding and balancing both can elevate your storytelling and deepen audience engagement.
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“Never name an emotion,” says K.M.Weiland in Helping Writers Become Authors
Explore K.M. Weiland’s insights on crafting deeply emotional fiction in this blog post inspired by the Helping Writers Become Authors podcast episode, ‘6 Tips to Write Deeply Emotional Fiction.’ Discover why emotions should arise naturally from your story’s context and why ‘naming an emotion’ should be a last resort. Share your thoughts and learn how to master showing emotions through subtext, actions, and reactions. Join the conversation now!
The Value of Community in Writing and Editing | A Gratitude Post
✨ A Gratitude Post to See Out the Week ✨ I joined a Zoom meeting the other night and felt nervous while waiting. It was a writers’ group, and their agenda mentioned editing. I thought it might be helpful to join, hoping I could offer something valuable to the discussion. Even if I stayed quiet,Continue reading “The Value of Community in Writing and Editing | A Gratitude Post”
Mother’s Day or Mothers’ Day? Where should the apostrophe go?
🌷It’s Mothering Sunday here in the UK. And if you’ve been wondering where to put the apostrophe in your card… ✅ I can confirm it should go between the ‘R’ and the ‘S’. Mother’s Day Yes, more than one mum is celebrating a special day today, but it’s convention to treat it as a singular.Continue reading “Mother’s Day or Mothers’ Day? Where should the apostrophe go?”
It’s good to talk. Writers/editors, do you do enough of it?
Eighteen months on from going all-in with Cherry Edits, I’ve added time to talk into my schedule. Excuse me while I mix my metaphors… The majority of my week is still taken up with at-the-typeface edits: my bread and butter. And it’s good bread and good butter! I love the work I do – keepContinue reading “It’s good to talk. Writers/editors, do you do enough of it?”
Creative writing groups: they’re many and varied. Find the right one for you.
Who here attends in-person creative writing groups? 🙋♀️ TL;DR – They’re so varied. If you try one and don’t like it, try others. Here are some reflections on the creative writing groups I’ve attended over the years. ⭐ A weekly group in a Leeds cafe after closing, perhaps a Thursday evening. Great. Nice atmosphere. GoodContinue reading “Creative writing groups: they’re many and varied. Find the right one for you.”
Elevating Fictional Dialogue: When the unwritten rules of successful communication should be followed, and when they need to be broken.
In their studies, linguistics undergrads learn about Paul Grice‘s work on conversation, considering the Cooperative Principle and its maxims – four unwritten rules for successful verbal interaction: 💡 Quantity: Judge the right amount to say.🌐 Relevance: Keep your words pertinent to the conversation.🗣 Manner: Be clear, precise, and maintain order in communication.🤥 Quality: Tell theContinue reading “Elevating Fictional Dialogue: When the unwritten rules of successful communication should be followed, and when they need to be broken.”
‘Show don’t tell’ is a useful rule of thumb. Here are some easy wins.
Struggling to express your characters’ emotions without telling? Let me help! Here’s a sneak peek into a no-stress method. 👉 Negative emotion ‘tells’ to avoid: He felt frustrated. 🚫 They looked uncomfortable. 🚫 She was sad. 🚫 👍 Better to ‘show’: He grabbed his coat and left. ✔ They fidgeted in their seats. ✔ SheContinue reading “‘Show don’t tell’ is a useful rule of thumb. Here are some easy wins.”
Cherry Edits’ 2023 Round-up. And what’s in store for 2024?
What a year! 🔢 1,048,046 words edited. That’s 16 editing projects for 11 clients, 80% of whom were writing in British English – the other 20% American English. All projects were fiction-based, across a range of genres, with my top three genres occupying the top 3 spots – I’m mainly known for fantasy, women’s fiction,Continue reading “Cherry Edits’ 2023 Round-up. And what’s in store for 2024?”
