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What does the viewpoint character know?

I’m reading Writing The Cozy Mystery by Nancy Cohen. Here’s a reminder she gives to writers using the first person or a close third: Avoid out-of-body experiences, such as “If I knew what was going to happen, I’d never have walked through that door.” Who has knowledge of the future? The Author, that’s who. CertainlyContinue reading “What does the viewpoint character know?”

I can help you fix your story.

I love being involved with books in their early stages. Developmental support lets me help writers see what’s working, what isn’t, and how to fix it—so their stories become clearer, stronger, and more satisfying for readers.

Every Writer Needs a Support System

Writing a book isn’t a solo journey. If you’ve ever read an author’s acknowledgements, you’ll know how many people quietly help bring a story to life. Editors, coaches, beta readers, agents: they’re all part of the village.

Writing Tips: When Actions Overlap

What is false simultaneity and how do I avoid it in my writing?

How do the books we read in school shape us?

Here’s a short extract from Reading Lessons by Carol Atherton – a reflection on the books we studied at school and the way they quietly shape us. And now I’m going to be nosy: – Are there school books that still echo in your mind or your writing? – Have you ever revisited one andContinue reading “How do the books we read in school shape us?”

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When Etc. Should Be ‘Et Cetera’ — With Special Reference to Fictional Dialogue

Wondering when to use et cetera instead of the abbreviation etc. in your writing? Especially in fictional dialogue, getting this small detail right can make a big difference in authenticity and flow. Learn why et cetera should always be written in full when characters say it, and avoid common styling mistakes that can pull readers out of the story. Perfect tips for writers who want polished, professional fiction!

Stories from the North – A Night Out with the Cumbrian Book Crowd

A joyful reflection on the Lakeland Book of the Year Awards 2025 — celebrating Cumbrian writers, books about Cumbria, and the region’s rich literary community. Highlights include local authors, publishing diversity, and the importance of nurturing young creative voices.

What a first draft can teach you that a published book can’t. (A writing coaching win!)

Discover how using an unedited manuscript in a writing coaching session helped a client spot craft techniques and grow as a fantasy writer.

Let’s Talk Editing – What Every Indie Author Should Know: Join us on Zoom, June 8th 2025

An invitation to join Claire and Vicky for a chat about all things editing (for indie authors)